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作文:Forlorn person
| 这是我看了《再爱我一次，妈妈》这部电影后，有感而发写的诗。这是第一次写这样的诗，若有什么语法错误，望大家别见笑哦，也希望高手们能给我指出来，谢了！ |
Dear mom
If you can love me once more
I think I can live in the world happy
But you had left me
So I'm lonely now......
When I was anguished
No one consoled me
Because of my dead heart
However
I don't think I'm unlucky now
Because
I believe that
The god will bless me all the time!
Dear mom
My thought is right,isn't it?
You must agree with me......
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